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Post by Lewis on Jul 24, 2011 12:00:24 GMT
Wow...really good post.
Sucks to hear that bro. Same happened with me and my mom and dad split when I was 2 :/ so I can understand where your coming from :/
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Post by King Silva on Jul 24, 2011 22:09:22 GMT
That is really sad dude but really cool that you could put something that means a lot to you in real life into your storyline.
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Post by raichu26 on Jul 26, 2011 0:19:43 GMT
Damn! I'm actually glad I was sick all of yesterday! I is OK, guys. Thanks for such the positive feedback. Next chapter should come up during the week.
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Post by raichu26 on Jul 29, 2011 1:17:35 GMT
Intruders! Refreshed and restored from the greatest slumber I've had in my whole life, the two of us set out for Petalburg City, part of the road to my inevitable first victory. I guess I must've feeling cocky (who isn't?) because I realized we hadn't eaten yet! I found some Berries by the lake, picked about 20, and made ourselves Toast w/ Pecha Jelly, and some juice. Shortly after, we headed off. At that moment, I thought: " S***, a 3 vs. 3? I'm gonna need one more Pokemon in case." Baby? Yeah? Why don't we walk around a bit longer? You wanna catch something, right? *nods head* OK. with that settled, we walk around a bit longer, until, via Fishing, a wild, and a very feisty one at that, a wild attacked me! This was fairly decent leveled, considering it was Lv. 13. A Peck, an Ember, and a hint of evasiveness caught me my 4th PokeArmy Member! I caught Brenda a Corphish, too. Thank you, boo! *blushes* You're Welcome, My Princess. With 4 Pokemon each, we go into Petalburg City for a quick stop. We eventually meet Norman, Petalburg's Gym Leader, and his wife, who both offer a "hello." In any case, we figured just have a Training Session, but Norman offered me one, which I accepted. After about an hour, we come out of his Gym, tired, so I decided to freshen up. Well, noon, and we've got NOTHING to do. You... I am NOT watching Twilight, baby. I can't stand that s***. I ended up studying Roxanne's Battling Style for about 2 hours on end. Then, after lunch, we took a dip until about 4:00. We then said our good-byes, but not before receiving a couple gifts from Norman: What are these? A Badge Case, for your Badges, obviously, and a PokeNav, so you two know where you are. Gee. Thanks. With the sun still high, we set off, running for Rustboro which we make it to in 5 minutes. However... ALL HAIL TEAM AQUA!!! *muttering* Goddamn motherf***ing explosions *to be continued*
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Post by Lewis on Jul 29, 2011 17:52:13 GMT
I'm going to tell you something from experience! When you are just starting out on a Pokemon roleplay, and its your first one, DON'T rush to get a six person team. Because when me and ben went together on our first ever roleplay with Pokemon, we fucked up big style. I rushed in quickly, and if you look at the bottom of the page on sims board take a look at my team! I fucked up big style, I don't want you to do the same. Yours is realistic and good but take my advice on rushing in with catching pokemon, get my drift?
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Post by raichu26 on Jul 29, 2011 18:07:26 GMT
Ah! I get ya, man. I think I can do good for a Squad of 4. Torchic's got the advantage in Msuville, and, plus, I may take the old "ketchum" Route and get someone to import a few foreign Pokemon later on to replace the weak ones. Don't rush. Got it. Thanks, man.
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Post by Lewis on Jul 29, 2011 20:38:14 GMT
It's ok dude. Just don't want you to ruin your story! Maybe plan the next few episodes ahead, maybe I can help you out a bit bro!
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Post by raichu26 on Jul 29, 2011 21:10:44 GMT
I like that! Consider it done! I've actually got Ep. 5 planned, which is an intro to Team Aqua, and learning more about Hoenn. And Ep. 6, battling two Aqua Grunts, etc.
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Post by Ben on Jul 29, 2011 23:37:02 GMT
Like Lewis said, don't do an "us" Take your time, enjoy it, and most of all, make us want to read it I already love reading it
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Post by raichu26 on Jul 29, 2011 23:45:38 GMT
Will do Will do I can tell.
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Post by raichu26 on Jul 31, 2011 22:30:25 GMT
Hey, guys. A small update. Per the advice of my 2 Advisors, I've decide to release my Lotad. There are actually a few reasons:
1) I've got a stronger Water-Type in Corphish. 2) I REALLY don't wanna f*** this up. 3) I never really had that much of interest for it in Gen III.
It was either Lotad, or Zigzagoon, and judging by it's Moveset, when I evolved Zigzagoon into Linoone on Sapphire, it learned a whole bunch of moves like Dig, Thunder, etc, etc. So, I release Lotad as of today, and continue on with:
Torchic Zigzagoon Corphish
And that will be my team for a little while. The Gym Battle w/ Roxanne will be 2 parts.
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Post by Lewis on Aug 1, 2011 8:25:37 GMT
Good idea!
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Post by raichu26 on Aug 1, 2011 20:19:00 GMT
I had a feeling it was a good idea. Like I said, Lotad never appealed to me.
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Post by Ben on Aug 1, 2011 20:46:04 GMT
BUT NACHO LUDICOLO IS EPIC >:{
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Post by raichu26 on Aug 1, 2011 21:28:22 GMT
In due time, in due time. I didn't leave Lombre or Ludi out, just the inferior Lotad, dammit!
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